Round 1: Battle 11

[Frost]

20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Dickride
Due Date: ASAP (not done within 2 days...DQ)
Voters use brackets OR explain vote!
NO using other persons freestyle against them!!!

May the better freestyle win!!!

dont matter who drops first...


LAST BATTLE OF ROUND 1!!!

[Secwrit]

Yo ya'll niggaz got 2 hours orits a DQ n we just move on to the 2nd rd.. some1 drop suttin!

[TREVER]

Yup.

You Really Ain't Fuckin With Me Son...
~#1~ On The Site...You Ain't Even The Next In Line..haha.
No Hard Feelings...No Beef.

Everybody Knows That I Rhyme Tight As A Clam's Ass/
Ridin' Your Own Dick So Much, It's Hard Not To Pass Gass/
I'mma Laugh Last, When I Set Ya Flag At Half-Mast/
Number 1'll Put You Under Son, Not A Brag, That's Fact/
Your Raps Lack, Cats Hop-Scotch And Skip Your Lines/
Couldn't Get The Top Spot If He Got X To Pimp His Rhymes/
Dude Sayin' He Thuggin Cause He Knew What A MAG Mean/
J's Bluffin', He's Nothin, Tuckin' In His Jewels Like A Drag Queen/
Fool Never Bagged Green And He Talks Of Bustin' Gats/
He Ain't Know Shit About Em', Unless They Come With Caps/
Jay's Not The Hardest On The Roster, Talkin Deadly Bout Himself/
This Imposter's Even Softer Than The Teddy On His Shelf/
This Is Wisdom At It's Best, Sonny, I've Seen Em' Come & Go/
Somethin' Like Your Hunny, When I Skeet Than Dump The Hoe/
So, Now How You Gonna Say You On Top When Rappin'/
Like Them Late-Night Hot-Lines, You ALL TALK...No Action/
So Just Drop The Rappin', You A Fuckin' Poser. STOP!/
And Break-Fast When You Hear The Toaster Pop/
I Dealt In The Streets, I See No-One Faker Than This/
Sonny, I Handle Twice The Beef When I'm Takin' A Piss...

HaHaHa...
I'm That Cat Who Got The Mobster's Stature/
Still Lands Them Punches Wit hA Boxer's Fracture/
HaHaHa...

~#1~

Let me Know...

[Jay]

thats not how u battle battlin is about punchlines and disses check this shit homie..

[TREVER]

Stop Free Postin..lol..DROP!!!
And I Don't Follow Rules...I Brake Em'.
That's My Diss...And That's How It's Gonna be...
Thought U Only Had 4 barz Left... I Wanna See Ur Verse...

[Jay]

I'm about to show you how to rhyme, present some shit with the intent to dement/
There's no kind of way you can prevent the only way you can get out is to repent/

Your rhymes suck, so to you lyrical wordplay is what I'm going to teach/
I'll have your head collecting shells like a 6 year old girl on a beach/

As this freestyle progresses the ending will result in a fatal reaction/
In a physical sense, I'm sending solid bullets into your bloodstream causing a capillary attraction/

Trever Is the homosexual dike type, inother words he's known as a man lover/
He's the type of fag who enjoys giving horrible cum-facials to his grandmother/

When Jay gets done destructing you'll suffer from serious blood deduction/
I'll flush ya mouth with gas then light a match, that called human internal combustion/

You'll be requesting a replacement of hips after I~greet~you~with~hollowtips/
I'm the one who knows if you get hit with showers or heat like a me~te~or~ol~o~gist/(meteorologist)

This battle is unevenly matches this kid doesn't even match the criteria/
I'll put the gat to his temple & if hes a survivor he's sure to be in a a state of dementia/

Battling Trever is a joke Frost got me battling you in the preliminary round/
You won't make it to round 2 because you'll be secretly buried in the cemitary grounds/

I waste my milk all over ya girl that's why they call me the dairy rotter/
I'll steal ya bitch and leave you with a scar on ya head, like harry potter/

I'll insert bullets in ya abdomen and have you pukin blood up like deadly bulimia/
The injuries are gonna infect your brain so bad the doctor will have to shave ya head like lukemia/

remember use brackets

flow:
creativity:
multis:
punchlines:
overall:

[caka]

frees were hot but i gotta agree wit jay.Battlein is different than freestylin.Trev is hot but when it comes to battlein punches are more important so i gotta go wit Jay


flow:Jay
creativity:trev
multis.Trev
punches:Jay
overall:Jay

there is no doubt trev is one of the bests when it comes to freestylin but jay is bit better at battle verses
thats what i think

[Jay]

^ thanks for voting, 1-0 and upping

oh yea and since frost didnt put the amt of votes u gotta have to win i guess we usin house rules (3 votes=ko, 5 votes=win)

[Secwrit]

Battlin is about punchlines, but not like how ya'll thinkin.. Ive battled in clubs, in streets, back in high school, i talent shows, and had live battles hosted by DJ's at frat parties.. and I roll wit muh fuckas who are signed to BranchOff/Universal and we battle just for the fuck of it. . BATLLIN is when you try and make the other person look as stupid as possible while makin your rhymes as hott as possible. Person whos rhymes are hotter and makes u look worse wins. And alota ya'll on this site get punchlines and metaphors/similies and Multi's/Wordplay twisted, so Ima post the definitios to try n help people out.. ill post the link


http://www.shadyblock.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=3363

[Jay]

i mixed up the..

You'll be requesting a replacement of hips after I~greet~you~with~hollowtips/
I'm the one who knows if you get hit with showers or heat like a me~te~or~ol~o~gist/(meteorologist)

This battle is unevenly matches this kid doesn't even match the criteria/
I'll put the gat to his temple & if hes a survivor he's sure to be in a a state of dementia/

..lines so if ur reading it before i edited it disregard it

[Blitz]

flow:Jay
creativity:trev
multis.Trev
punches:Jay
overall:Jay

[Jay]

^ thanks uppin for more votes

[DANi.MAZ]

hot battle with 2 of in my opinion, top kids on shadyblock but my vote goes like this...

Flow: Jay
Creativity: Trever
Multis: Trever
Punches: Jay
Personals: Jay

Overall: Jay

Nice battle to both of ya`ll!

[Secwrit]

flow: Trev
creativity: Jay
multis: Trev
punchlines: Tie ( I felt Trevs were more personal, but Jays were more frequent)

overall: Trev (i like the personals and it had a better flow)

[Jay]

thx dani, thats a ko nice battle trever.

ur vote was tooo late secrwit, i got 3 votes already

[MonkeyBones]

other than not knowing how to spell cemetary you shit was HOTT j..

Trev.. I've seen you spit alot better

If it wasn't already over, I would have voted for J!

[TREVER]

WOW..hahhahahahahaha
Alrighty then...haha.. not gonna say shit.

[Jay]

be cool trev..it was a good battle

[ballernp74]

I kno the battles over but i think Trever won that shit
Trever had better flow it was more creative and had better multis

flow: Trever
creativity: Trever
multis: Trevor
punchlines: Jay

overall: trever

[Jay]

^ suck my diiiiiiiiiiiiick, the battles been over you dumbass bitch, and you dont know what the fuck I have you never even seen me.