Jay vs 3x's Plat'num

[Jay]

Due Saturday
12 lines or less
no crew or hate votes
vote in brackets

3-0=ko
4-1=ko
5 wins it

[STATUStician]

iight homeboy, y Saturday though ( Dont kare but just askin )

[Jay]

u can drop anytime u want

friday is the final date

[Jay]

hope ya kno its due tomorrow..

[STATUStician]

yeah i got it! Dont take that long

u said FRIDAY! 2morrow thursday

[Jay]

i meant to say friday

[thedrunkrussian]

Lets See How Creative Yours Is

[Jay]

nigga get off my dick

[STATUStician]

Jay since u on go ahead and drop and lets get it crackin

[Jay]

i never even started writin

[STATUStician]

well go ahead then and drop

[STATUStician]

<div align='center'><span style="font-family:Comic Sans Ms">Look here this man Jay is about to get sprayed, that’s what happened when his bitch got layed
He’s a Super Hoe I mean a Super Mod, pussy just watch these flows I just sprayed

When I flow I make niggas pay attention and they give me the PA sign (Parental Advisory)
When u flow other niggas on ya dik cuz u a vet, but this is my time

U think u a ghost writer, u like gas better watch my lighter
I kome harder everytime I flow nigga im a real FREESTYLE fighter

Yeah Shadyblock is where u stay but nigga im takin ya space
Let me spit these bullets at ya and watch ignite flames in ya face

Nigga u a SUPER in this game here just to spit out dumb shit, cartoon nigga aka should say THE PJ’s
Ill stomp ya face in the ground and have cats scratching at ya carkas like a DJ

This aint for u old head, ima new cat and this SB rap battling is easy
Don’t take in too much of this Piff flow cuz ya head might start feeling queasy</span>

[Jay]

eherm..

Dickrider, you probably spent hours trying to study my style, but you can't repeat it geek, cuz ya weak/
OnceI trigger the heat at ya hip bone you'll hear a clink, you're instantly transformed into a paraplegic freak/

Homie ya wack I eat niggas like yourself everyday as an afternoon snack/
After the packed macs atrract ya back ypu won't be able to relax or physically react

When I go on a rampage, theres no way to escape danger, hide, or dodge/
Kidnappin your mom and girl to engage in a menage while you struggle to breathe in a gas chamber that was once my garage/

You might be a shadyblock member, but youre nowhere in my league, you have the similar rhyme abilities of D4L and Faybo/
I'm turnig you niggas into "science projects" making red spew out ya belly button like a "paper mache volcano"/

Nigga quit trying to copy this, youre destined to end up as the 23rd bitch on my lyrical throbbing list/
Vindictive mind, clappin ya loved onces as they wait for you in the lobby bitch, call me a murder seeking hobbyist/

the italic words indicate multis

vote in brackets or explain

lol and am i the only one who noticed he used sprayed twice in his first bar

[Erratik]

Punches: jay
Flow: 3 x's
Multies: jay
Creaitivity: tie
Wordplay: jay

Overall: jay

[Jay]

1-0 uppin

[tank]

Punches: jay
Flow: 3 x's
Multies: jay
Creaitivity: jay

Overall: jay

[Jay]

thanks 2-0 uppin

[Corleone]

Punches: jay
Flow: 3 x's
Multies: jay
Creaitivity: jay
Worplay: jay
Personals: 3 x's

Overall: jay

[Jay]

thanks KO

Closed.